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Blog 10: Working on English Prompt 2

Possible Thesis:

Science has greater importance in aquaculture than the arts do, but the arts have their place.

Possible Claim Sentences:

There is research science in aquaculture that art cannot touch.
What will keep aquacultured organisms alive: art or science? Scientific practice will be more helpful in raising these aquacultured organisms.
Art has its place in aquaculture.
Does art really need to be taught in schools for someone going into aquaculture? I do not see why that is necessary.

Spit-balling

Aquaculture is the cultivation of an organism or organisms in an aquatic environment. My type of aquaculture is simple fish-farming.  Science would prove to be very useful. Studies on how to culture some organism is going to aid me in how to aid that same organism on my own. However, there is no perfect guide on how to culture anything. Any aquaculture is going to need some improvising. This would involve creative use of available materials as well as creative and quick thinking. Fish farming isn’t research science, so it does not need to be as particular as research science. Fish farming is science in practice; it is meant to be practical. If your fish is growing and is healthy, keep doing what you are doing because it is working.

However, figuring out how that works falls into research science. Research science in aquaculture must follow the scientific method. Without the scientific method, we are subject to the whims of our minds and the mistakes it comes with.

1 Comment

  1. Elisha M Emerson

    Excellent. It could help to brainstorm the qualities and skill sets associated with a successful fish farming aqua-culturist.

    As you continue to work on that thesis, remember to be as specific as possible. Thank you for so many of your wonderful blog titles and thank you for your hard work.

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